Score: 10

"Great Work !"

by: popraz

date: May 10, 2008

I loved the interaction of the instruments, the way they blend and cut into each other. It's really a beautiful track, and I think it's the flute that really makes it stand out. Excellent !

Score: 9

"checking back"

by: S3C

date: May 10, 2008

yep, this one's better I think! much thicker, its got a juicier sound, and I really like the addition of the flute. I especially like when all the instruments play during the end. Either I was being to harsh last time, but it seems this time around the fast parts and trills on the instruments flow a lot smoother. I just think the piece cuts of abruptly and it would be more suitable for this piece if you ended on a more tonal , sustaining chord.

Keep up the good work!

Score: 10

"Woo Hoo!"

by: ubertuna

date: May 10, 2008

Yazorz! I just noticed this! Much improved. It's not the kind of song that I usually listen to, but this is quite good :) It has great energy, and the flute is a great edition. It's hard to listen to without trying to picture the song in your mind, it would go great with a film, but not so well stand-alone. Congrats kjhf, you finally earned that 10 ;)

P.S. A Sadness. (final) is out! I changed the pan to separate the instruments.