Great Work !
I loved the interaction of the instruments, the way they blend and cut into each other. It's really a beautiful track, and I think it's the flute that really makes it stand out. Excellent !
The Secret Forest 2-
Probably the last in the series. This has a different ending, much thicker texture, and various notes have been tweaked.
Any useful comments? Improvements I could make? Review and I'll get back to you ASAP!
Finally, Hope you like it! :D
Great Work !
I loved the interaction of the instruments, the way they blend and cut into each other. It's really a beautiful track, and I think it's the flute that really makes it stand out. Excellent !
Thanks :D
checking back
yep, this one's better I think! much thicker, its got a juicier sound, and I really like the addition of the flute. I especially like when all the instruments play during the end. Either I was being to harsh last time, but it seems this time around the fast parts and trills on the instruments flow a lot smoother. I just think the piece cuts of abruptly and it would be more suitable for this piece if you ended on a more tonal , sustaining chord.
Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the excellent review last time - you helped me see the flaws, and I patched them up this time :)
The ending was a bit experimental I admit, but I like it.
Thanks again
-kjhf
Woo Hoo!
Yazorz! I just noticed this! Much improved. It's not the kind of song that I usually listen to, but this is quite good :) It has great energy, and the flute is a great edition. It's hard to listen to without trying to picture the song in your mind, it would go great with a film, but not so well stand-alone. Congrats kjhf, you finally earned that 10 ;)
P.S. A Sadness. (final) is out! I changed the pan to separate the instruments.
Thanks. I basically spent the whole day on this. I hope it shows :/
Just reviewed your final Sadness piece. It's excellent :)
-kjhf
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.