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Lets get straight to the review. The bass drum kicks are really pathetic, I'm not going to soften that blow. The guitar is also pretty weak compared to most of your works. The entire song is really bland and needs a lot to it. Yeah, obviously this was a long time ago for you. My personal problem is that I made 30 seconds or so of the melody to Castle Lololo in FL9, then I learned that the music standard these days is soooo much higher, and I gave up because I was worried it would suck. I think that when I get the time, probably around summer, I will finish it up and maybe have my friend give me some ideas if need be. Anyways, on with the review, overall the song is bland. It almost sounds as if you have literally no bass at all in it. The only thing that sounds somewhat like your current things is the harp, and you rarely use that anyways. Haha the 3 year difference really shows xD

~Spiralz

Hunh...

It sounds like something out of Final Fantasy VIII...

You wouldn't happen to be channeling Nobuo Uematsu, would you?

Now where did I hear this song before?

I agree with the user below. You should make a remixed version of this, perhaps in FL Studio. And make it awesome ok? Add squares and then add epic winds, strings, and whatnot. Of course, you should ask permission from the author just in case he doesn't want you to remix this since it's already awesome.

(If you read this review, kindly read rtnario's "New Desciption")

... XD

This song's got heart!

You should upload a remake of it woth real instruments, and if possible, vocals.
It'd make it to the Portal's Best Songs Ever in no time.

hehe^^

i see that u did this earlier... i must say, u learned very much... indeed^^
but, for the melody u (or ur friend? share it^^) get 2/5, for the remix (well, i don't know what it sounded like before... but now its cool, so other 2/5 points for u.
that makes u get
4/5 8/10
MfG FrEzil