A bunch of loops and jumbles.
too cluttered
This song has a bunch of nice sounds going on. Once everything kicks in though there's far too much dissonance between all the instruments. The drums dont seem to fit all to well either / are too quite. Instruments need to be separated. Its too jumbled at points. At least the sounds aren't bad, that'd be more knocks off of it. Some parts sound alright, some parts sound good, others aren't so good. Ah well. Pull it all together and it could be something really nice.
THanks mate, trying to make it tighter, but like I said, I am not a great mixer but I appreciate the feedback.
really neat
It's really awesome that it's all real and it was played very well. I was totally captivated. The only problem was that the different parts weren't in sync with each other. If you could get it all tightly put together, that would make one heck of an instrumental performance!! :)
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ooh yay criticism at last! sweet thankyou mate! if you don't mind my asking, what parts in specific would be better mixed? I really am not the greatest mixer, i'm just the only person we know with a half decent computer.
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