Could use more

This could definitely use a lot more of everything. I tihnk you should retouch the entire thing. This tune is best listened to with headphones no doubt. Lots of subtle things going on here and there that is best picked up with headphones.

If you put a little more musical content in the music it may sound better :P Although, I do realize this only took you an hour so no worries. You probably could pump out something better with a bit more time I'm guessing! Keep working on it!

-Oddler-

hahaha

are where are most of the samples from? i recognise the computer error one, the breakbeat drums one, and one that i dont know how to explain

though you did make it all sound cool together, you should have at least made it pretend to be a song by have an instrument play with it, maybe a midi guitar

keep up the ... good work