Lose the vocal effects

If you just turned the sound of the voice down a few octaves, rather than tried to mess around with it, you'd have a much better sounding tune.

The guitar that you've put in sounds good, if a little repetitive, although I am distracted by this nagging feeling at the back of my head from listening to the assault on my senses from the vocals.

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Unique sound, though the guitars destroyed it.

I really liked the distortion on the voice. No idea how you did that, but it does sound pretty cool.

At 1:03, where the guitar becomes the main instrument, the song becomes kinda repetitive and the aggression of the guitar kinda nullifies the creepiness of the vocals.

Maybe you should concentrate on the creepy vibe and maybe throw in some other random shit in too? Breathing, glass breaking, howling...

Rather negative

Hmm. I didn't really get much out of this. The lyrics were very hard to understand (Thanks for writing them out). At 01:00, the music just dropped out and this guitar...noise...thing started. Not too much to my liking. I was very confused and a little creeped out, so I guess that's a good thing because only the best music can bring out emotions in people.

The volume is quiet

Wel the lyics are not very plesant, but they do sound good with the sound.

The intro is quiet the sound not as loud,as it could be. The use of the voice throughout the track, is a good mix for me. I could not make out the words, but i liked the heavy metal sound. Im not that used to this genre of music, but i did like this track. The lyrics were random and rude ,but i thought they were good ,when he said motherf.

The problem is the sound can drown out the lyrics at times, and i miss the funny words on the other ones.

Ovreal a good track.

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I like the effect on the vocals here. It sounds pretty creepy and sometimes almost scary.

The guitar is a bit too quiet, but if it would be any louder the lyrics would be very hard to understand, so I don't think you would get a better result if you'd increase the volume of the guitar.

Overall, it's a quite good song, that could use a bit more work with the mixing.

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