well...
this is awkward...
yea well whether u like it or not, you shud still vote and review please i ned info
well...
this is awkward...
yep and im glad u gave me some criticism to work off of
Ok......
I'm not going to be mean but some things you should do is this:
Speed it up..
Scrap the part where they are talking...that was awful...
Add more man...there's like nothing in it all...
There was like one good spot at like 1:02...that was neat...
You just need to almost totally revamp it or something...
its all good!
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