Hmmm.
Phew. Been a while since I wrote a review. *Cracks fingers*
Brilliant conceptual layout for the song. The samples are a little questionable... Were you to replace some of the sounds with something of higher quality/clarity, it would be quite a nice piece. It could also use some Eq'ing, nothing too serious, bit of delay here, bit of overdrive there... A touch of butter and sal....
Oh wait. Yeah, music. Right.
*Clears throat*
Not bad at all, for a second submission. I think you've got a vague idea of how the flow in the song is supposed to correlate to the rest, but it's a tad muffled. Think of how this song would convey the tracks your mind is spinning. I just got back into making stuff myself, but I haven't quite gotten the hang of making FL/Reason dance as I deem fit. Bloody hard thing to do.
Anyways, hope to hear more from you... A bit of refinement and I could see you spinning something decent in no time.
P.S. Don't let the score(s) fool you.
Cheers
-CO