Nice, but not wowing
I might just be a picky person or have listened to _way_ too much ambient, but all I can say is this failed to really impress me. I liked it a lot, but nothing really would set this apart from three quarters of the kahvi collection.
i'm not sure what to even suggest as an improvement. I would say you're doing quite well, but your sound needs something that really makes it unique or otherwise better than others.