Score: 10

"really soft"

by: shadowchaotailsevil3

date: May 6, 2008

this song is really slow and classical

You just feel moved by it

Score: 7

"Seems like a trickling stream"

by: blackcat2000

date: May 2, 2008

I enjoyed it quite a bit, but I feel it's more like a trickling stream... in slow-mo. Not that that could really fit into a title... "Hey, have you heard A Trickling Stream In Slow-Mo?"
Back on topic. Background sounds would indeed be appreciated. Maybe kick off the song with solely the sound of a stream. For the music to seem more watery, I'd suggest going up a few notes/octaves and pressing lighter. Like light dancing, as it seems a bit forceful around 4:45 when your attempting to press many keys very rapidly. I'd work on the rapid part too. Seems a little out of time.
Overall, very enjoyable. Good work. :)

Score: 8

"Has character, but doesnt spark waterfall imagery"

by: S3C

date: May 1, 2008

with me, entirely.

=The Good=
-The piano has lots of character, with its muffled EQ and cheap, detuned sound (sounds like it was recorded on a cell phone)
-The melodies are nice when it gets off the ground. Everything was constructed quite well, favorite part was at 2:20, that section has sweet chords
-Playing flows very well, respect. very beautiful.
-Lots of variation throughout

=The Bad=
-This isnt bad at all, I would just expect a more lush piano with lotsa reverb and a crisp sound to go along with a waterfall.I know its not your fault tho.
-I would personally scrap the intro because I dont think it does the piece any good. The general creepy vibes and dissonant notes just dont fit the song I think. Mainly 00:00-00:55ish.
-If you could transcribe this into a computer program, add strings and maybe a harp that would be great
-An actual waterfall sample might help the general imagery
-Hardware is always more important than software when recording, but perhaps a brighter EQ would go with the muffled sound

Ideas: 8.5/10 Diversity: 9/10 Clarity: 6.5/10 Overall: 8/10

I would give this a 9 if it was just for playing, but clarity is an important department and I think that aspect was generally detrimental to your track. Keep at it tho, I would love to hear more playing from you.

Score: 9

"Not bad."

by: sirtom93

date: April 28, 2008

Maybe the instruments seemed a little to defined but it had a nice slow pace that relected well with the ambience of the song. The progression of this song was brilliant though and the piano really bought this forwards. Keep up the great work.

Kind regards -
Sirtom93.

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Score: 9

"Excellent"

by: Shanus

date: April 27, 2008

Really enjoyed the track, excellent timing, excellent tempo and structure. Couldn't ask for a better song at all. Loved the whole relentlessness of the song, and can see why it's called "Waterfall". Great piano work, look forward to your next track, great job

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