Kinda amusing the first time.

Well, it kinda made me chuckle the first time I heard it, but I doubt I'll be keeping the song - it got old fast.

The first half had a decent guitar riff. You mess up the timing and seem to play a few bum notes, but I guess that sorta adds to the so-bad-it's-funny quality.

I find it really hard to make out what you're singing about, but the accent is hilarious.

I think the part around 2:10-2:40ish could have been cut and maybe cut out 3:30-4:39.

After the initial 'shock', the 2nd part didn't make me chuckle much at all and after around it gets old before you're finished.

There are some decent chords in the bg, but musically, it's really only good as a joke.

I had to stop listening

Dear god, it gets worse.

The guitar doesn't carry a tune and the vocalist can't sing, so what are you thinking with trying to make a song out of this?! Two wrongs don't make a right and I don't care if it is a joke, because I'm not laughing either way.

It's not Heavy Metal, so I'd suggest that you re brand it into something like pop, since it's got a snivelling whine of the Boy band about it.

Then we get the rock part, which is almost as bad, if not worse. The lead singer has some real issues with how close he gets to the mic - tie him up, so he doesn't get closer than maybe a foot from the mic, as it would help a load with the song. Giving him some decent material to work with might help as well, but that's only maybe, as I'm not sure if his talent would be appreciated elsewhere.

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It's a funny song. It can be clearly heard that this is improvised, but it's not a bad thing. Most of the time, improvised songs are funnier than planned songs, and this is also the case with this song.

The beginning is pretty funny with that slightly out of tune guitar and the repeated "We love you".

The "metal part" is quite good, too. But the guitar is a bit too quiet there.

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Thats so sweet

That was pretty funny and, sweet up intil around later on then it changed.

This is a sweet song for Jason its got rude lyrics, but they make me laugh. How often does a song make you crack up?. Thw words are rude but funny, its entertaing the voice is very good. Its make you want to listen more. The faster heavy sound when the tune changed, was good. It was more like what i expected to, hear a good listen.

Now my main probelm was the constant use of the a racist word, was totally wrong and spoiled it for me. This was unexpected i dont have a problem with the swearing, but the use of a racist word is wrong ,but i dont know why you added it. The volume to quiet again the lyrics ,can get repetitve after a while.

Overeall i liked the first half but the change around 2 minutes, to the heavy metal sound was fine. The racist words was off putting maybe ,you could have left it out

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lol

I don't know who Jason is but I think I would love him too just based on the real emotions behind this song.

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