the 2nd part is really good but the 1st part is just... fine i guess

It's pointless to say anything! It's a shitty job, but it's acceptable for those times. 6/10

The second part sounds better than the first one imo

~R&P

Notbad

So this was pretty good notbad of a tune love the deep sound then drops out and you build up once again so for this it was pretty good sound work, wish this was a tad longer though has some nice potential in it, I really like the style you created.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
could be longer

~X~