Multi Platinum

I'm not sure you're looking for any critiques since you can't go back and edit the song. However, in my opinion this could be changed into a very cool ambient piece. The percussion introduced around 4 seconds doesn't really keep in with the whole feeling of the song. Perhaps try something a little lighter, maybe just some cymbals, or no drums at all. Variation in the background melody is something I feel that needs to be introduced too. Overall I believe it has good potential to be either a techno song or an ambiance piece. Nice work.