Hmmm

Take Out the 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 everything else is good

dayum boi

sup this ya boi Ayzee
I'm straight down to cut out somthin on this track
I could be all like
"I hit'em, book it off and quit em'
got em runnin scared
bitch n***a dribblin piss from his pussy hair
I'm on this track n***a im killin em'
best get they ass lost like if they was gilligan"
idk mayn
its yo call
but dayum yo this shit hella tight, you a beast K.

Sick shit

Let me know if you still need a verse dropped. Hit me up for any other collabs man, shits real professional.
-obie

This one

Has absolutly no reason for not being 1rst.

yo..

i think u should make this into a contest

have different people do verses etc, and choose a winner

either way, this really does sound professional, and also ur voices are the most real sounding rap voices on the site, as in u dont sound nerdy, u sound pretty cool

which is very rare around here

u earned my 5

Shek