Score: 9
"i leikd it cuz it woz kewl"
date: April 2, 2008
Seriously though the guy behind the counter did sound a whole lot like Bill Cosby, rum raisin pudding. Overall it was good, if not a bit long for a newgrounds audience, even I had trouble sitting still for 5 minutes.
The voices were sound, they were clear and comprehensible, the only thing I'd suggest working on was the pace, though I wasn't sure if this was improv or read off a script.
Just keep it up and don't start talking really fast, swearing and constantly saying "WHAT THE FUCK I DIDNT EXPECT THAT?!" llolololololol
April 2, 2008
Author's Response:
I did the entire thing as a one shot improv.
And yeah, I realize it is a bit long and probably really nonsensical.
