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Hey guy.. I made this random loop from a melody I heard in naruto kinda, Someone PLEASE help me.. I know it's not much.. I'd like to know what I could do to make this better.. feedback would be highly appreciated.

FN in
Keep it limpin'

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Average Score: 9.5 / 10

Score: 10

"Well"

by: Broken-Needle

date: March 27, 2008

This ain't 2 bad, if you use FL you can bring up a turn table, which is useful when sampling work try it out sometime, it's on the mixer, look for it if you can't find it, it's there. Anyway ifyou need further help than that look up tutorials on beat making and using the programs. 5'd it 2.30 / 5.00 (+ 0.48)
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

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Score: 9

"Teh Feedback!!!"

by: F-777

date: March 27, 2008

Feedback:

1. Bass = This song is missing bass and it would be so much better if it had a bass instrument and would make it sound more proffesional.
2. Beat = Hi hat needs to be turned down. Kick and Snare should be the main parts of the beat so if you turned down the hi hat it would make it sound more realistic.
3. Synths (sounds) = The starting instrument is being drowned out at times by the second high pitched one. Try turning the starting instrument's volume up and the secondary one down.
4. Set up = It is quite random however you could make an intro, chorus, and official ending. Thats up to you though. Oh maybe extend the song? I think its too short.
5. Overall = Very pleasant piece! I found it enjoyable and not painful to the ears. There's no static which shows that you have control over this song! Very calm and peaceful!

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Awesome stuff!!

(If you have time could you please review my newest song? Thanks!)

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