Wow
I say awesome.The music is great and catchy,I think the lyrics are great!You have a very good voice
Author Comments
Lets just say, that I finally finished this beast. The vocals gave me some trouble because they are high and they are harmony riffic.
Cool riff, the song is cool too I guess... lyrics!
All the times I've tried to do the best
I could have sat alone and chose to do the worst
When it ultimately came to the thin end,
I finally gave in, to let it just go to waste...
And so now I...
Wish that I could turn back the clock, and take from the dock all that is not
Giving me all this pain and agony, and taking away all of my civil liberties
I knew my freedoms would not last, 'cause the time to act came on way too fast...
I'm still wishing for the chance to say.
I hope there is another day
Giving me a chance to stay
Why don't I get a say?
Is there another way?
I cling on to my fate
Until it' far too late
Why do I choose to wait
Until it's the final date?
I tend to the path that never ends...
I wish that I could go and change the past
Work it out to make the good times last...
But the time to act comes way too fast...
And so now I...
Wish that I could turn back the clock, and take from the dock all that is not
Giving me all this pain and agony, and taking away all of my civil liberties
I knew my freedoms would never last, 'cause the time to act came on way too fast...
I'm still wishing for the chance to say.
I wish that I could go and change the past
Work it out to make the good times last...
But the time to act came way too fast...
Work it out...
Nice
I like where you went with the melody of the song, but you really should work on expending your vocal range. I can hear that you're straining to hit the high notes. perhaps you could have waited a while and stretched your cords a bit more before recording the vocals. Damn, that bass is pretty catchy. Sometimes your pitch doesn't quite match the music, but you just gotta work on your singing. Your screaming is very, very good. :)
WOW
Dude wow your a good writer and greater voice we need to collab togather somtime I am a vocalist too :)
Well.
I don't like the lyrics at all. Plain and simple I could have writen better hands down. The song itself was ok, hated those lyrics though, the singer has a nice voice but not for this. You need music that compliments the voice. Truth be told.
CyriltheWolf responds:
Fair enough. I wrote the lyrics for selfish reasons, need they be good or not, I had catharsis. I felt better great! I'm sure there are some who get in similar situations who could identify, but man, glad you can write better lyrics hands down, awesome there.
The was written awhile back, so, its not the best, someday I may renovate it, but yeah. Considering I'm the singer of my own music, I think that my voice can work for this music, I just have to sing in that style. Given the melodies being quite high, and me being a bass it has potential to sound good. And, truth be told, I can already sing them better now than then.
Thanks for the constructive criticism. >_> Telling me why the lyrics suck would be nice. Such as, they are shallow, have no imagery, often repeat themselves and are sophomoric (all of which I just pointed out on my own things) would have been nice.
Thanks for the review!
Better than any other band, EVAR!
D/L'ed, 5ed, and 10ed. On my MP3 and is my friends favorite too. Nuff said!
Credits & Info
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4.50 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Mar 20, 2008
- 11:29 PM EDT
- Genre
- Heavy Metal
- File Info
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- 4.4 MB
- 3 min 13 sec
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