Awesome.

Excellent Corey, really good. I personally don't think it's too packed, and I really like it. Though, 'this storm'. I don't about you, but that doesnt suit the song. I know it mention it in the lyrics, but it doesn't really have a ring to it. But the song on the whole is pretty good. Well done.

DUDE

not to be harsh but, DONT SAY VOTE 5 on ur submissions. Then they'll vote 0!

Plus the song was too packed. Its too compounded and it changes too much.
Too much stuff in one!