The lyrics perfect it

brilliant. Couldn't have done it without the lyrics. Or elsse it would stay on page 46 for a long time.

Good

I didn't downrate it, but try to tweak the quality. The voice level varies, and needs to be turned up a bit.

I had this problem at first when I recorded some people with some beats I made and beats I ripped. Try using a headset with an integrated microphone or try to keep him from varying the distance from the microphone during recording, don't let the beat echo in the backround, have him rap wearing headphones and keep everything else quiet.