2 Things I love... 1 thing I hate.

I love the NIN sound... Absolutely.
I Completely ENJOYED your drums.

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I Hated the piano you used... I would love for you to go on Google and look for a Soundfont of "Steinway Grand Piano" Get it... Tweak it. Love it.. and play.

I have no clue if that's FL Keys.... but what ever it is I despise.

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Just the one thing my friend... Keep up your good work.

~~Kyle E. Juresic

Grimey Distorted Goodness

I like this, it's grimey, dark but the piano lifts it up slightly, the background noise that comes up gives it an extra dimension, like a clashing mic with a PA system. Makes it sound very human.
It doesn't really _need_ anything else, but maybe a remix with vocals / slight guitar would make it sound entirely different.

sweeeeeet

That's a fucking good mix, man. Sounds dirty, but interesting. You should get a vocalist with a really deep gravelly voice to sing on this one.

Wow!

Sounds like you listen to a lot of Nine Inch Nails and some Radiohead!
I love it man, this is one of the best songs I've heard on NG so far.

Ahem...

Ballin'.