Has potential

I dont really know where to start with this track. Hmm.

The intro made no sense to me, it seemed to lack direction and purpose. The ambient low booms are a plus though.

The lead that drops in around 0:46 is pretty nice, but it tends to lose that initial cool-factor it had after a while. Maybe changing it up the last bar in the meter would help?

When the lead comes back at 1:35, the bass line seems to follow it and that kinda ruins it for me, although the lead itself sounds fairly good.

There seems to be a lot of wide spectrum noise across everything but the first portions of the track, it kinda drowns out everything and makes listening intently for a specific instrument kind of hurt the ears (quite literally).

What I would advise is to find a spectrum analyzer, then give certian instruments a certian 'portion' of the bandwidth and use various filters to make sure instruments stay within thier 'portion'. This will help combat strong instruments fighting each other.

Furthermore, when you do choose to play more than one instrument in the same frequency zone, use panning to create a soundscape. These are also great at accentuating the different instruments and combating instrument fighting. Plus, when you get good at it, you can create some awesome stereo effects. ;)

It was a good try though, and the song has potential. You can always revisit this and make it better :)

-CM