I really like how this song turned out. The beginning makes me think of Hell or failing at something, then as the song progresses, it picks up and makes you want to succeed.
All things considered it was great
This and much of your other music to me sounds repetitive, each melody as it stands is good, but other instruments, as well as other melodies need to be played together to make the song. Many of your melodies in each song are not distinct from each other making the song sound repetitive. None of which however, takes away from the fact that it is a great song :) Good job, please make more.
thank bro :)
Nice!
This would make good boss music.
yea it would :)
thanks for the revieww!
kool!!!
this shit waz thight...i likez it!!
thanks for the review :D
Uh-Uh
No.. That's All I Can Say.
It's Random Notes Playing.
In Fact, I wouldn't Really Call This A Song Nor A Loop.
And what's With The Fade Out?
I Would Accept This If It Was Your First.. But Come On...
Really..?
And This Doesn't say Succeed At All To Me...
More Like... DIE.
2/5 4/10
-{3T}-
i made this a month after i started making music and i had no idea what i was doing...
not all people can make amazing music when they first start.
thanks for the review i guess
Hmm...
I don't like it because you don't have a real melody... The notes are just... Playing, you know... Right? And you forgot one thing: The ending of a song is really important. If you have some time, listen to this: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/170956 (no spaces)
It's made by michael425... Just go to the end and you'll understand what I mean... I think =D and it isn't BAD, just try to work a bit on the things I said... That'll fix it =D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Adamaja456 
