PLZ READ

This is MY old account and for some strange reason it got deleted or something so i cant get in it,
Check my new account plz.

Mayney

Derivitive, but OK

Sounds like all other trance out there. I was expecting something big to buildup after your snare drum roll, but nothing happened. I agree with your comments, some new samples would be nice. In fact, I'm sure if you had good instruments it would sound so much better. Another thing, the melody pretty much sounds like all other trance out there. Try doing something unique, you obviously have some melodic skills.

FLStudio

If you're looking for samples, I'm guessing you mean loops. You can find torrents of loop packs on google, though I don't really use loops in FLS. If you have the version 7 of FL there's some cool vsts in there.
It sounded like your loops didn't match up. Your lead was winded which sounded like sytrus. Definately not powerful enough, and a little repetitive.
Another tip is to put compressors on your main track and individual channels (ie kicker)
Good track though, keep it up, it sounds like progress.
If you want any other tips in Fruity Loops send me a message, I finally figured it out a while ago.

nice

Its a real nice beat but for my ears its not agressive enough, too much soft tones but its still a real nice Soundtrack. Keep it up!