voted 4

This isn't half bad. I can tell you're just stating off at producing music. So for someone right off the boat, this isn't all that bad.

Nice job making this melody, it sounds nice, and flows really well. Although your choice of leads and saws, kinda threw the melody off.
The percussion, you're gonna have to work on that. The samples Fruity Loops gives you aren't all that good...
Overall pretty good song. Keep up the great work!
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my latest track "So It Begins [F]"

Pretty good.

It sounds good enough fo a 8/10 and 4/5