Could use more
So this was actually notbad I think it could use more to it I like the drum and base but could use more dominant drums and different versions of drums and of course could be much longer on the whole piece as a whole it's a nice and solid piece of work though and I like how this starts off too so more drums maybe some drops and make this longer and you are good to go
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few ideas of improvment as suggested above
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