Improving...

Much different from Point Blank. Still a little too plain for me. Beat and Melody went nice together although it wasn't real unique. I say the best part of the song is the melody. Add a bassline and take out the sudden stops of the beat, it has the tendency to make people lose interest fast. Good use of the hats and balancing of the background choir. Add a bassline and a filler melody, somthing low and distorted that has a fast pattern.