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Uploaded
Jan 19, 2008 | 9:45 PM EST
File Info
Song
2.8 MB
4 min 50 sec
Score
3.71 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.71 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
643 Plays | 105 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Grunge
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Author Comments

-Intro-

-=VerseI=-
You don't have to leave
I won't ever come here to say
"Your wrong again, your fighting for a friend,
you don't know"
Don't know...

-=Chorus=-
You are my drug
and you take
You are my drug
and I don't care to take...

-=VerseII=-

But I do remind you
for your sake
and I don't care if you dont agree with me
You can die and arise
If I had I lied lied lied
You can take your time
and let me cry cry cry
in my bed...
In my bed...
Abandoned here

-=Chorus=-
You are my drug
In the needle
In the light
You are my drug
Slowly killing
Slowly willing
to induce
induce
My pain and reality; the game
Again and again
I wont care
and I wont care.

-=VerseIII=-
You are taking away
Awake,
Awake my son
You don't have to see anyone
No more
No more, no more
Please give mercy on a child
Whose been mislead here
On his own behavior
Behavior
All of you can kill me right here

-=Chorus=-
You are my drug
You missed my life by
You are my drug
You killed my heart and home
My drug...
Drugging life

Reviews


NessbeatsfoxNessbeatsfox

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Well...

It's not horrible, but it's not that great either. The intro was really nice, but when you started strumming, you lost me. The chorus sounds like you're trying too hard. Tone it down a little bit and let it flow better. The lyrics aren't bad, but try letting them flow together with the music a little more. Also, the guitar drowns out your voice, which makes it kind of hard to listen to.

To be honest, it reminds me of some of the music I wrote years ago. Just keep practicing and this could be a really good song.



Coyote13Coyote13

Rated 1 / 5 stars

well...um...

Can be better.



LegendaryModeLegendaryMode

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Nope

ummmm, you need to work at it a lot more. Keep trying, and practicing. I sorta get what you were going for. Some advice: Bettar lyrics, calm the guitar(it is to instense or suddle..) Balance everything out..Make it floww.
I'l be looking out for ur next one, hopefully much improved.