hmm
needs a lot of work... man... everything on this modern hiphop page sounds weak az fukk and its sooo overrated. I don't know how this could've possibly scored 10... this shit doesn't sound like hiphop period. Now, don't get mad and check out my music and comeback at me with "O WELL LISTEN TO YOUR STUFF" bullshit ok? because all that stuff is old az fukk and I wasn't even that good back then. Jus lettin you know imma be real on this cuz this is getting ridiculous. now here's some constructive critism... actually nevermind thats right because this doesn't even sound like hiphop. Plus I suggest when you get really good dont submit to Newgrounds anymore, people be stealin. keep doin whatchu do (but make it sound more like hiphop not... trance mixed with misc or whatever k. preciate it.
P.S. - Just to be nice I wont give it what it deserves (a 2) I'll give it a 4.