...hmmm

i liked it but you did better songs.
You also should bring more diffrent instruments in this song....like guitar or someth.

ive never hurd this song

i may have not hurd this befor but its good

Hey!

Fix title, and it's pretty close to awesome... this doesn't give me the feel that someone is dying... nope, it's something else...

Very nice, very nice

But I agree with the guy below me... the title... doesn't fit. Won't mark you down for that, coz it's an easy fix.

This is very good work, very calming. Bravo!

I dig it.

I like this, it's kinda hard to explain.
The only thing I would change is the title.