What I think.

The intro was pretty long man. But otherwise fine. Really have to kick up your intro into the kicks. Your using a classic style of introduction to songs where you place a piece ontop of a piece. Overall a pretty snoozy intro. The bass comes and the chord progression isn't exactly where it needs to sit. The balance goes a lil crazy too when the strings come in crazy loud and hitting a pretty loud 3rd. But it was fine. I would suggest instead of your current form of Intro-Intro w/kick-bassfill/kick you use something more traditional. It bring up the actual overall quality. Possibly radio form as hip/hop tends to do. Your kind of doing trance form now. Intro-Chorus-Verse-Chorus-Verse-Outro . I do like the diversity of the background sounds such as the deep blips and such. Overall it was pretty good. Work on your form and you definitely got something going. Nice fade at the end as well. Keep it up man.