You updated it! :D
And you took my advice, too, and added in a melody at 0:58! It's pretty awesome, too. Sadly, this review will probably be shorter since I'm reviewing a different version of the same song, but I'll try. ;)
Not much is different... again, your melody is great, no complaints. Bass, while improved, is still a bit too bassy, I can't hear the boom of the kick. :\
Apparently, though, your computer is giving you trouble, which always sucks... hope you can figure it out soon. Until then, you can't really fix much, huh? D:
Nice job either way, I definitely enjoyed it. ;D