well..

...first off, its cool that you're recording stuff, which generally does take more work than writing things.

However, this is a really, really short loops that is still pretty simple. It gets old, especially listening to it over and over. Also, as has been mentioned before, the quality is really bad. I know it sucks not to have great recording equipment (...from experience :c), but I think you could try to play around with it and make it sound a bit more presentable.

Anyways, yeah, could use some depth, but for something so simple it's alright.

Feels like mingen skin.

ehh... it sounds kinda weird, sound as if it was recored, it didnt sound really good, it sounds as if it was recored on a camera when the noise goes diffrent...

Anyway, i did liked it, except how the music sounded like recored in a bad way.

So i'll give you a 6/10 3/5!

Keep it up, and try to get better next time.

Cheers, Dan

western

a kind of johnny rebel