Now it does have that more dim feel about it but could use even more darker element maybe a small build up and dwell back into the dark

~X~

good

good track and nice melodies. it has a sad feeling to it. only problem is the sound is scratchy like it u play a tone too high. otherwise rly good

8/10
4/5

Good.

Regardless of quality we need more REAL instrumental work being posted to NG. So keep it up :) I think if you cleaned up the recording quality(obviously) and added some chords and vocals you might have a hit =P As for adding chords, don't go looking for chords that fit in the key you're playing or whatever. Try and build chords around the notes as you're playing them, and then experiment with some finger picking or weird strumming patterns. At least that's how I approach things like this.

Well...

It's neat you recorded this, but the recording/mixing quality is pretty awful at times, unless all that distortion was intentional in which case I really didn't like it.

The composition really doesn't move me either; it seems more bland than depressing. I dunno, really doesn't click for me.

That said, I think if you keep at it you could get something cool soon.

ten

good gutiar playing