Better than your last
Wow, you got better over two months of time. Although some of your sounds are off and that preset melody you get with FL? Don't use that or any other ones. It's good to be original. Send me this song and I'll remaster it for you and send it back to you. See what you think.
Like I said, you're getting better which is a good sign. This isn't very good but all you need is more variations and some plugins. Time will tell... Meanwhile, keep on workin'!