Uh..

This s techno. Its not fast paced, it doens't have a crazy reese (Distorted loud bass)
that has a pumping bassline, drums aren't the right beat, I mean, they're plain techno/trance drums. like kick hat snare hat. They should be kick hat perc snare hat perc hat perc kick snare hat perc.

Nice try though.
4/5
*[Sp1r1T]*

nice beat

ya the other guy didn't listen to it all the way through. the only rewason i didn't mark you higher was that it was slightly slow and the quality wasn't that great in some parts (or that could be my speakers LOL) anyway its a deacent song.