could be better
is difficult to understand the song...
sounds like you always add some extra notes... that doesn't belong there
just need a few more practices...
keep trying
Author Comments
Third upload people! I need some constructive crits!
sounds a little off
dude, next time get the music down first and then practice it before you post it on newgrounds. It sounded promising if you could cleac it up and not rush things then it could end up being a very good peice of music.
DarkBytexx responds:
Thanks, i tihnk you will like the new version ALOT better than this one.
The GUITAR!?
the guitar sounds terrible, it sounds that its gonna explode, is it orginal from u playing, and there is something rong with da recorder? cuz it sounds really weird and tweaking
DarkBytexx responds:
I use "audacity", if you could point em to a better one i will use it .
And also i use an acoustic everything i make is by me if not based off of a song i can play, like the beginning is used from "Three Days Grace- Never Too Late" by them.
sounds
Through most of the song it sounds to me that there is that one sound that doesn't fit with everything else which drives me crazy. Everything after 1:40 sound's unplanned. It's cause the notes are not sharp enough. Then you change the beat between 4 and 3 which isn't a consistent sound. These are thing that I noticed and would like to share with you. If any of those things are what you purposely did for your song then ignore what I have wrote.
DarkBytexx responds:
Yeah it's the 9th fret, i kinda figured that out.
thanks!
Credits & Info
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- 807
- Downloads
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- Score
- Waiting for 1 more vote
- Uploaded
- Oct 25, 2007
- 5:54 PM EDT
- Genre
- General Rock
- File Info
- Song
- 2.2 MB
- 2 min 28 sec
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