Decent

And here was something decent, It has a nice echo sound and just comes flying out of the box like no tomarrow and you really presented it well, this one did seem somdwhat short and could be longer if you ask me but what you do have is pretty good and a nice listen.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer more content.

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woo

Scorching. :) The background beat could be a bit heavier, and it would be nice with one more instrument, maybe guitar. Otherwise the scratching in the foreground sounds awesome. Very original, keep up the good work!

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3/5

Hey, it sounds pretty neat, but doesn't sound a whole lot like Oldskool Hip-Hop. It sounds more technological than a breakbeat. There is no beat in this song anyway, which does make the scratching noise sound more like a wobbling synth wave, which is an effect you can get easily in most production programs nowadays. Also, your hi-hats are ineffective, and sound kind of bland. Try modifying your sounds by pitch or length to make it sound a little more like your own. Anyways, keep practicing, my friend!