ok cool
and once again we have another part to this exciting, This one seemed more exciting then others, with more action and close up scenes i belive thats what really jumped out at me, but you did have a good story going here, again the only real issue here was the bubble texts, could be larger and more comic like, but i see thats how you have it all, but notbad still.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As sugested maybe a more vibrant and larger bubble text boxes.