Deep color
So this one was really nice with the deep colortone really standing out aswell, the long strip like view was something different and unique aswell so nice job indeed here, you have some nice work here the comic design is nice the characters and the content of the comic is really nice and you have some nice work here I would love to see more comic strips like this one.
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Didnt find anything really needing a change but I would suggest make more of this fine comic of yours.
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