Interesting composition. Only thing I can say about this piece is careful about drawing eyes too narrow. This is an assumption but I think since you're Asian you tend to draw eyes more like your own when he's supposed to look like he's from Syria. Whatever the reason, they look a little stretched.

love the background, what is the message?

Is this piece made to bring awareness to the problems in Syria? If so, what a wonderful piece. Also since I'm Syrian myself, I appreciate you making such a beautiful piece that shows the true daily struggles that the country goes through. Hopefully one day it'll all come to an end.