Definitely needs some edits, but is overall a well drawn piece of art. Even if you're not the best you have to start somewhere and here's the best place to get advice :)
Definitely needs some edits, but is overall a well drawn piece of art. Even if you're not the best you have to start somewhere and here's the best place to get advice :)
Oh my were there edits. Yeah I enjoy advice and I'm getting better every day.
It's mediocre but maybe reduce the clouding a bit.
I did so, and made many other changes.
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