Improvements need to be made all around.
Although, the proportions aren't too bad. But everything else is pretty awful.
Improvements need to be made all around.
Although, the proportions aren't too bad. But everything else is pretty awful.
While I do want to take the time to thank you for the critique, the the statement that there are unspecified improvements that need to be made is maddeningly unhelpful.
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