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Chapter 1 Page 5

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Art by Will Hobden (me)
Story by Kei Alfonso

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Elizooky

2021-01-14 02:11:37

this is gud

hockey-grapes101

2010-03-22 17:05:13

nice picture m8!

very nice monster might need a little work! but thumbs up other wise!

Willpinoy responds:

whats wrong with the monster?

Redcavalier1001

2010-03-21 13:14:05

Nice

Hey nice job man, I like how it's all colored in shades of gray to kind of add to the creepiness. (or maybe you just wanted that manga-esque style, i dunno) But I think the thing you did best was definitely portraying a sense of motion. You did an excellent job at portraying that energy in every panel, the only problem with motion that I saw was in the left panel, second row, the monster probably could've been leaning in a little more I think. And the hand of the monster in the first row, right panel seemed a little off to me too. But other than those tiny details, great work man! Keep it up!

Tinsy

2010-03-21 07:36:44

Wery nice!

It looks wery nice, I don't know if it was your intention to make the skull, appear like it mad of matel then organic material. It looks a little like that when the hand goes through the head.

Willpinoy responds:

It does? well,i didnt really intend on making it look like metal. They're just clumps of flesh