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Medical bot Jeeves

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hello lovers of 3D and what not,
VidGameDude here with a little freelance work on my own time.

this is the uncaring persona medical robot jeeves from the game cellcraft.
i dont really want to go into detail so ill make it short.
so this is for you LiLG since i loved the game alot due to how entertaining and educational it was.

hope you and the other group members like it!

o and btw for those critics out there....yeah i dont care if the backround is shity....this was a quick fanart job and i dont feel like making atmosphere so back off ¬_¬

l8s

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WOW... this is allmost epic

hey nice work you have there! are you whant to make 3d comics :D?
btw that can you tell me what program do you use, maybe i will try to make my own arts...
P.S: The art is realy cool how much time do you work on it?

very good

its exactly like jeaves, you are very good man:)

It's me again Margret

Here I am to review another piece of 3D by you again.

I'm going to start off with the bad of the bad this time.
I don't like this work. You have done much, much better than this. The robot day entries you did are an example to this testament.

The model is blocky, awkward just lacks a sense of style. I do take in account that this is a fan art piece, and not an completely original design, but I feel you could have added a sense of flavor this lacks. I know you have the skill in 3D to do it too.

Many of the parts, like the fingers and the medical cross on the chest don't feel like they are part of the robot and feel like they are just simply stuck on there.
A similar issue with the torso and how the leg simply runs in to it. Again, it feels as if it was just stabbed in there.
On the other hand, the arms have a connection to the body and don't feel like they are just shoved in to the model. Which is good.
Back to the torso, I feel that the over all shape is kind of a problem. The flat chest and the point at the bottom just doesn't cut it. you should have popped out the chest a tad and gotten a connector on the bottom point like on the shoulder to connect the leg.

The wheel on the bottom is a another issue. I feel like the hoses you have on the wheel is not enough to support the bot. you should have made some sort of bracket and attached it. Other than the attaching issues I find the wheel quite pleasing
Other things I find good with this is the head design. I think its simplicity is very effective and well done. I do admit that I would have like to have seen a little more advanced modeling from you with perhaps some fabrication seam lines and such, but I think it is alright.
The bend in the leg was a good touch. Many would have left it straight and that would not have worked at all. It would have completely ruined the sense of weight of the robot.

I know what you said about the background, so I'm not going to ride it too hard. I think what you have going on here is working. This is an over all simplistic design and too complicated of a background would have cluttered and destroyed the piece. I do think that maybe you could have placed a thing or two to give it more of a doctors office/medical lab feel but what you got works.

I'm sorry but even with quite a few good things, I know you can do much better than this. so I have no choice but to give low scores this round.
Next time you have a piece like this, spice it up, and add a little flare to the original design.
2/5
5/10

VidGameDude responds:

Fair enough...

i just dont want to always make such detailed work...
it kills me soo much.

that angel thing took me about 5 days to come up with a design, 2 weeks to actually build the damn thing, and then 3 days to come up with its textured state.

3D is not the same as regular drawing AT ALL....
it takes a major toll on me to make such fine pristine work and i wanted this to be quick and painless...

=_= i feel sick just thinking about making something like that again

To be fair...

@Manuel-Dangelo:In the game they didn't really have shadows so it would be silly for this to have a shadow...

almost there

it's almost great. you still need to improve your lighting and shadows

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Uploaded
Jul 16, 2010
4:52 PM EDT
Category
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