Looks good

So this was pretty good and looks very nice the water and how her body reflections off the water is really well done so awsome job on this one

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The arm is not deformed, first and fore-most. Have you ever seen someone lean back on their arm like that? Sometimes it looks like the crook of the elbow pivots out. Normal to me. As for the picture itself, absolutely stunning, I love the brightness in the colours and how you didn't use bold lines which gives it a more natural look despite being cartoon-y at the same time.

Love this so much, looking forward to more! 5 starred & favourite! :D

Oh, there is a lot of potential there i'd say!

Looking good! The form and color's are soft, the reflections a real enhancement of the atmosphere, and the character herself looks beautiful! She is kinda twisting a bit much though, not just with the arm but with her entire upper body... I guess her legs are actually angled towards her other side, but as this can't be seen below the water surface the twist looks somewhat unnaturally forceful. Nice work though!

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this looks so sexy :D if i were to have any criticism it would be her left arm looks like its been bent backwards a little but apart from that it looks sweet :D