not terrible

A bit of criticism. Either eye, when viewed without the other looks fine, but you've got them kind of out of sync with one another. If you dropped the eye on the right ( her left ) just a smidge, it'd look alot more even. The on on her right looks great by the way. Her hair looks a little flat right in the middle. That could be the original photo for all I know though. The hair could use a bit of detail work, but I understand not wanting to go that extra mile. Hair can be a pain in the ass.

Beyond that, and this is the part that kills me. It doesn't really look like her. It does look like someone, just not her. I say that kills me because that's the main problem I have when I do portraits. It looks perfectly fine... except it's not the same person.

The rest of the body looks great, the mouth inparticular looks nice. Good job on the lips. But I gotta say, the eyes being off kills the whole thing for me, and since that's naturally the first thing i'm drawn towards I notice it's off before I begin to see whats right about it.

It All Right, just need a little more work

Everything is nice but the face, no ofense. The nose is really wierd and so are the placement of the eyes. Nice shading. The hair's pretty good.

ugly

i really like how crooked her eyes are. It's a turn on. I'm just gunna throw up a bit. Ok, well, her eyes are nicely drawn but very crooked and disproportionate. Other than that its fine but its a big mess up.

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Better thsn what I could do but, you could use some work on the sixe of the forhead. You should also try to improve how you shade the eyes, it just annoys me a lot how you shaede them. The size of the forehead is affecting how I view her hair a lot too. But it's still good...keep trying?

Talent.

Youve got the talent to make this look realistic from the botom half of her face down is very well done. But in agreament with the other two reviews her nose, forehead and eyes are a little off. Also Find a new technique for her hair. ( unless u wanted it to look scraggly in wich case good job) But u can definatley do better.. Great work i will be checking out ure later posts :)