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Sins of the father

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Back in high school I knew a girl. She stayed to herself every day. Nobody ever seemed to notice her. One day i sat next to her during break. I tried to start a conversation. She stayed silent trying to ignore me for the first few days however she began to open up. Telling me about how she has moved around from school to school. her mother had passed away when she was young and her brother a few years before she made it to this school.

One day she was more silent than she normally was. face buried in the not so interesting math book. she refused to respond to me all together. As the class began i noticed something out of the corner of my eye. She was bleeding. the blood was dripping out of her black hoodie creating a puddle on the floor. worried about her i grabbed her hand and lead her straight to the nurses office. she jerked away screaming " No he will kill me!". That was when I had heard the rest of the story. After her mother had died, Dear ol dad would take his anger out on her and her baby brother. He would grab take her tie her down beat and rape her over and over till he would eventually pass out from exhaustion on top of her. "He always made sure never to hit the face." she told me, " People would notice scars then.". After that day she had vanished. No trace of her anywhere.

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Makes the piece all the more poweful.

TrojanMan87 responds:

Thanks. I have to say I wasn't expecting all these wonderful comments about the makeshift story. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy knowing I actually made an impact on the viewers :)

Holy... uh.... MAN what a story!
Gotta admit, thought it was a real one 'till I saw one of you responses to the comments... FEW!
Anyway, man, what change in style this is, very dramatic, and in a good way, too! The picture/story clearly mirror each other, and just the overall dark feeling within the picture made me kinda scared for the girl in the foreground, easily one of the best things art can do for me is to make me feel emotion. 5 stars for you, sir.

TrojanMan87 responds:

:) glad it worked out. And will defiantly try to create more stories to go with future images.

Is this a true story?

I can actually believe it and I wonder what became of the girl. Did the father succeed in killing her or was she rescued?

A very good piece of art to fit the story. Kind of reminds me of Killer Escape.

TrojanMan87 responds:

This story is fake. even though i do have a few friends who did in fact have abusive parents. they are alive and well. one of which i still have my morning coffee with. she still has some pretty nasty dreams about her childhood. but is alive and well. I guess that's what inspired me to attempt at a story.

plus it seemed to fit with this image.

That's crazy dude, the story was intense, really draws out the picture in a more meaningful way. Although depressing, great job, you're improving.

TrojanMan87 responds:

Thanks. :)

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