Father and Son - The Virus by thelazykid13 on Newgrounds

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Father and Son - The Virus

Here is my brand new Father and Son comic called "The Virus"
The son falls for a deadly pop up and gives his father's computer
a virus and crashes the computer and his dad comes in and in his rage, he shoots
his son with a Rifle.

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2013-12-06 16:13:22

It seems that little thought went into the anatomy of the characters. They are literally stick figures. Not even stick figures with any artistic merit.

The story isn't funny. There isn't any sort of build-up or punchline. It's just sort of a "Something happened. Character dies for some reason" scenario.

You would benefit from finding books and tutorials on drawing people. Stick figures do not get your message across and make it hard to take your art seriously in any capacity.

You may also want to search for the work of famous comedians. You may get ideas for better material.

thelazykid13 responds:

This is for the violence lovers. So it isn't meant to be funny.
Btw, you are annoying as fuck