NICE.
ARE THEY CATS OR DOGS??????
Battle Tails: Dog VS Ninja 2
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Now when I ask for a good font for dialog...
lets assume Ive already heard of Blambot!
The fon't actually ruined the dialog here, it would work for a humor comic but for something that's supposed to be more serious it just doesn't work!
TheBurningDonut responds:
one is an Akita (Dog) and the other is a Raccoon.
Not much into furries but okey.
For some reason the dialog here just doesn't seem to fit their character's characteristic...Characteristics, where are they? It looks like you just threw in some words to make it full of particles of a story. Since this is a serious-ish story, I recommend that you make it give the audience an intense feeling and let them be surprised at how one interacts with another and transforms the entire atmosphere of the reactions with the character's result.
*notes- When making a comic, spell check often
The last part is what I can't understand, why did she suddenly start to make a fight?
Also you have to check on your grammar. Some words are misplaced and missing here.
Just remember: This is your comic and you can make it better by taking advice, or finding a better way to improve.
TheBurningDonut responds:
Your absulutly right and I appreciate the feedback the biggest hinderence to the diolog was the font it's just to big but I could get anything else to look right.
and I know I am a horrendous speller!
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