I think it's downright lovely. The line on the inside of the elbow is a bit thick, considering how she's extending her arm. The shadow of the farmhouse might be a bit too dark, when compared to the subject and the brightness of the field... saw your gif, maybe it's just that last color filter you put over it, or just me nitpicking lol
If there were finer lines/shading and more details in places, I'd have no problem giving this a 5/5. All your work is very creative, colorful and well composed, and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future!