Difficult but good
It's the little details like the heart tattoo, the bubbles etc. that add up to something I really like. I think you did a good job with the lineart and it's a really interesting piece. I must admit, that I am not absolutely sure what I am looking at.
I agree with the others, that the colored items in the background are distracting, but I think it's ok for the green bottle and the reddened cheeks and nose.
I don't know why there is a cigarette hovering on his left, but I see it caused a fire. So that's probably part of the story of the drunkyard, which I don't really understand unfortunately.
All in all a good piece on the art side, but a difficult pic on the interpretational side. Or maybe I am just trying to overinterpret, who knows?
Well done!